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I want and need
You to see
The truth somewhere
Inside of me
I need somehow
To find a way
To show these words
I cannot say

You know the rules
You know the Game
You know my heart
All still the same
Its been said before
By now you know
How hard it is
To just let go

But you're not here
You left, you're gone
Leaving me
The broken one
It isn't fair
It isn't right
I never wanted
To give up the fight

I need it back
And need it bad
Need 'us' again
And what we had
So there it is
Now you know
The truth in me
Never shown

Author notes

As always lately, if you like what you see, tell a friend.
Inspiration? Where'd this one come from?

Well....
-_-
Yeah. It was her.
T_T
Pon. You know who you are.

Any ideas for a title, please let me know

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Comments

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  • Jasmine Minx
    December 8, 2009
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    This is a good write and it shows how much you still care for her. glad that you posted it. you are a good guy and you will find someone to fill the hole she left in your heart.


  • Running Blind
    December 7, 2009
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    I like it
    Keep penning the truth!


  • White Rose Wolf
    November 10, 2009

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    white rose wolf

    Aww this is very sad, but very good i liked reading this poem its really a great write. I'm sorry the insperations was from a break up


  • Xraided
    November 3, 2009
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    Not so easy when you're the heartbroken one, is it mike?


  • Jasmine Minx
    November 1, 2009
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    Im sorry that you feel this way. i have been able to tell from the beggining when we started talking again that you were in love with Carrie still. i could tell from your voice your not as good at hiding it as you once were. i wish you could be happy i really do and i dont know. im sorry i cant help.

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