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Ballard on its way

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uxTKifiyZBE

watch this space.

improvo words, testing testing


Simple words I ask of meet your heart,
A simple smile directing tears to part
Of me that unlike death donates it to,
can paralise the epics, those who do,
feel sudden mirth arising much contained
an improvise assessment once maintained,


  mode attainment that I could,
So jeopardise my chances 


while harmony of those whose souls it does
convey appreciation of the few;
bewildered by the fsaifhless harbour queue,
who benefit to quarrel such an outcome,
outshdow one another in a place,
that galavants the spirals epic trace,
a pixel epics

who do, deliberate the sense I as who
will follow while the keys to this

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 8

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    The link for the music improvisation and your write complement one another...Would like to know more about it...Like these ones where you either have music or yourself to listen to along with the write...

  • h, how lovely Tony I didn't realize you had done it

    It is definitely different from what I expected hehe

    Once again, you're too talented for your own good

  • Your new avatar over there - not nice!

    Beautiful composition. Thanks so much for sharing!

    ya All~Ways,
    ~ Jan ~