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It comes to my mind....

Its funny to bring you back to my mind, where I once believed I will never get you out..
I remember the days when we swear to love each other until the end..God knows I was blind.

Because it comes to my mind that you weren't good for me,
you got me lost in an ocean full of pain, drowning me in your own hate
for those who hurt you in your past.

Now I see that is time for me to clean all those sweet-sour kisses,
fake words and the nasty feeling of your once loved touch.

So I've packed my bags, I'm moving on,
'cause my life with you was like a hole in the head
Is this as good as it gets and you know that
I'm better off, and I should it have been long time ago.

Because it comes to my mind, that you were a good experience
to learn that not all the pretty faces are good ones, that sometimes
we shouldn't get want we want, because there is a huge different
between be loved and love someone.

I'm glad that today I finally got my freedom,
I'm glad I forgot your name and the reason why I was with  you,
However believe it or not I'm glad I met you, you made me stronger
and because of you I finally found the one I want to spend my life with..
Thanks God its not you but him the one who makes me believe in real love.


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  • Grey.Area.
    November 1

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    Wow this is good. More hopeful than teen angst, which I like.

    This section is so full of hope:

    I'm glad that today I finally got my freedom,
    I'm glad I forgot your name and the reason why I was with you,
    However believe it or not I'm glad I met you, you made me stronger
    and because of you I finally found the one I want to spend my life with..
    Thanks God its not you but him the one who makes me believe in real love.

    Good.Good.Good.

    Awesome.

    Louise.