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Without Depression

A life without the scars
without any crying
and never thinking about
dying.

A life without wearing black
to cover up how I'm feel
and never inflicting pain
because it's just too hard to deal.

A life without the fear
without the sorrow
and never being afraid
of what's coming tomorrow.

A life without hiding
without depression
because I'm told to make
a better impression.

A life without everything
that I've known for so long
I don't think it's possible
for me to ever be strong.

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  • Ladylennon52
    1 day ago
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    I like this poem alot great job


  • XForgotten MemoryX
    November 19
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    This really speaks to me, I mean I know how you feel, I to hate looking at my scars and thinking about all of the times I thought about killing myself.


  • dontmakemesmile
    November 5
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    this poem i can relate to 100%. i know what its like to feel pain every second of every day. loved the poem..


  • Memmy-94
    November 4
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    I love this poem ! xxx
    Very Beautiful poem.

    Peace.
    Hugs and Luv.
    Hope and Healing.
    xxXxx.

  • Really Good

    I know what it's like.... I really like how you put things in this poem.... I like it.....


  • totheend
    November 1
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    cant find a better word for it than, i love it


  • LoVeYaChEsTeR
    November 1
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    wow... thats a very beautiful poem
    very creative...
    aswsome ..

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