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With Regrets; The World



I like the taste of death on
Sunday mornings, after the rainfall
that ruins most weekends,
where as I found myself
prancing about the premises
of prominent prudes
with welcome mats that speak of how
you were not to touch, or come within its perimeter
because after all,
are we really good enough to be there?

How my senses fall around their factory
manners and moods, oh they smell of Sunday mornings
where my hunger takes me to swallow quick as if to beg my stomach
to spit it out, spew the source of human's
cold cold existence.

Maybe god's resolution has called you out
maybe you are on your knees,
praying for miracles
or redeeming your sins
is that your innocence
to fall behind imagination...


I prefer the illness filling my lungs on months to pass
where the blood soaks in my soul
and memories purge me to puce fixations:

slicing the sickness, twisting my tongue
ripping the righteous!

it is not in me to hide myself, for even your imagination
wishes in honesty

and honestly there is no one to save you

only shadows swallowing the sky

and stars

 

til there is nothing

but my Sunday mornings

that fill the soul with pleading

begging eyes

for their life?

 

yes,

that life that files in documents

working, slaving, pretending, dominating

slaughtering..oh you damned!


I hate you like those April afternoons

pretending warmth to blow you around

with chills to kill the dreamer...

 

 

 

and may the Son burn you

the way I will burn you alive

just to realize there is no heaven

nor hell

 

 

only goodbye,

you cold cold existence.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Play-A-War
    November 3
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    Oh wow, this is good! And i love the opening its just amazing! It's just such a good piece.

  • Marty-McFly
    November 3

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    This is amazing....your poetry pounds on my heart until im weak and then rips it out and fils me with the same sadness that your words speak of. This is tremendous work, im truly gobsmacked by ur talent. Very well done


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 2

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    SO HEARTWRENCHING!!!!

    So often have I felt like just saying to those who meant well but I just could not put up with their preaching to me. I was screaming inside but did not strike out for I knew they would only preach more to me. Those terrible feelings inside though just kept pushing me onward, toward a nothingness which I just could not keep from going to. Wonderful expression of just how these people and words touch our hearts yet we fall deeper and deeper. 's

  • bballer21
    November 2

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    wow. this is wonderful. full with so much emotion, and sadness. it relates to me in so many ways. i loved everyone word of this breath taking piece. wondeful! keep up the good work!

  • Yeah .. wow. So much emotion and sadness in this piece. It's amazing. It's how I feel right now. Something like it anyway. This was .. breath-taking. Really and truly. *claps hands*

    My favorite part was when you said " I prefer the illness filling my lungs on months to pass
    where the blood soaks in my soul
    and memories purge me to puce fixations "

    A m a z i n g <3

  • i can't think of words to express what i think of this poem but i have two that come close, amazing and wow, i know i could come up with better if i was smarter, keep it flowing


  • KissMe123
    November 1

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    Oh my dear lord, Stephanie you are amazing you're going to have billions of books (if you ever feel like publishing that is) and then you're going to get married to the man perfect for you !! Your so dang pretty, take your pick


  • rawrrpaul
    November 1

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    this is just amazing. i dont even have words to explain it.
    you've left me speechless.

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