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Found My Way Back Home

The days have fallen behind us, yet in our quiet imagination we see life around us has grown into something so extraordinary. The truest love between these two kindred spirits, lay dormant until now.I fell to my knees, when the day had finally come; when all of love's hope grew inside my heart, and spread through every pore. It made the story end so beautifully, filling every gap in these weary eyes. A life without you in it just wouldn't be enough, now that we have found each other among the crowd. I am lost inside a dream, a dream of great destiny and gentle understanding, and with an empty hand I have always traveled, until now. No dreadful weather nor a sour word could stop me or keep me from finding you. Within one day, I found all of your love; it has shown light to every moment after. I am watching the stars tonight, hoping, knowing, that tomorrow we will meet again. We will share a laugh and embrace a hug, knowing that miracles travel on swift wings for some. Now I feel that I am the luckiest, for I have found you, my dear. Here all time has stopped, for I have found my way back home, back home to you.

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  • darlee77 gold member
    November 1

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    A lovely write filled with hope, love and faith for a wonderful future with the one you love. Wonderful imagery and well chosen words. Very good.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 1

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    Oh my goodness honey boo hoo its flowing now

    You are a true blessing indeed . The day I hugged you honey I felt your Grandmas sopirit about us so strongly and felt her looking through my eyes at her sweet grand baby for sure . I at times feel them about me so strongly and feel blessed for it for sure .Your great Grandma when she passed new of my love for rainbows and two weeks after she passed I ws on my way into the post office when something made me look up into the sky.Honey their wsnt one whisp of a cloud to be seen the sky was a baby blue except for tiny little rainbow and I knew that very moment and took in a deep breath and whispered Thankyou mama for that lovely gift of love .A man was walking beside me and looked up and when he saw that little rainbow he went rushing to his truck to get his camera . Blessing come in many forms and I will tell you of many when we meet again . I love this poem honey and yes my heart feels so complete now that you are home .I love your mom that raised you honey and tell her we will love and cherrish her forever and a day .

  • darlee77 gold member
    November 1
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    Thank you for joining us in wishing her a happy birthday. Great write.