Intoxicated in your lies; I believed every sickening word you said. Brain washed into thinking you were right, I followed and stuck by you all the way. Not knowing that you’d throw me out of your tempting arms, at the end of the road.
You left me to fall, never to get up on my own two feet again. Never to redeem myself from your demons. Still you controlled my mind and inner body – Putting my heart on the line in front of my very eyes – but still I never knew. You betrayed everything I ever gave to you.
Choking on your words; bitter sweet oh to die for. No. The sheer hell you put me through – No longer will I remain your victim. Still I am aware all of me will stay tact inside of you; my soul lies deep beneath the surface – Suffocating with your blood drowning itself within.
As it reaches your heart...
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Blah. It was rubbish, please comment? 
This is how I feel..
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NO NO NO NO!!!!
NOT rubbish!!!!
Brilliant!!!!!!
WAHOOO
hit me right where it hurt!
well done.
Jezz
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definitely not rubbish. Very heartfelt my cupcake. I felt it deeply.
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Thanks Gaurdian <3
loves choo ^^
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I wish that I could write like this.
It is not rubbish.
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Thankyou very much.
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Oh my <3
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Thankyou. Oh my oh my
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not rubbish! great poem!
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Thanks Destiny!
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np
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