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The Day of the Dead and Dying

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A shallow grave, this mind of mine,

which drinks my fears,

my gentle laughter pale,

which sleeps beneath this fragile life.

Grayish dawns in memory unfold,

a sun, the Son of spirits drifting.

I shift my dreams to tombstone themes

where breathing sanctifies the dirt,

the hallowed grounds that dwell

like mourners in my soiled mouth.

I count the oaths, the promises, thoughts

whispered dead upon my grieving head,

upon those thinning lips which lisp

eternal in our Father's ear.

Weep now, speak rich in sour milk

of we forever dead and dying.

Bring tears to rest along the flowers

blooming into darkness... give cheer

to those who came before...

for we shall all the sooner follow.

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Photoshop by rrw
Original Picture: http://ftp.acc.umu.se/pub/gnome/teams/art.gnome.org/themes/splash_screens/Splash-DayOfTheDead.jpg

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  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    November 19

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    An absolutely beautiful piece. I think this embodies the spirit of the Holiday that this contest is about. Thanks so much for entering and Good Luck in the Contest!


    • rrw gold member
      November 19
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      thanks, Red! I enjoyed this one much... I live in a place where DOD is celebrated! A wonderful contest and thanks for the Gold!