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November the first


Words disappeared a month
ago, but to you
you've said everything,
and everything is silent;

to be the fool
who counts those seconds
like weeks on end
everyday seems to press distance
in my eyes
and tears formulate
behind, but never fall
it's not to be seen
nor spoken

yet the earth knows as
I run behind the shadow
tracing touches after night
when no one guessed
not even me

and we laughed.

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To be so mistaken,
to be the mistake
to be me


you took me aside
and told me of your wishes
and of love
maybe even a promise
to be poised then poisoned

never did you come out
to speak of what really resides...


a letter of forgetting
and a few pills to wish me luck.

 

 

 

 

God.

you really didn't love me.

 

 

 

did you?

Author notes

sigh..my head..stomach...heart..

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  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 26
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    okay, I won't critise. So the poem is..."to be poised"

    If ever meet her and I leave her or she leave me, I hope she remembers me with such vivid imagery

  • Marty-McFly
    November 2

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    This is amazing, very impressive...your poetry flows like nothing i have ever read, and it tells a story in such a small frame...wonderful. very well done

  • there is strong heart ache in your poems most recently, i am kind of hoping that you are alright and that as the words leave you so does that pain, keep it flowing


  • KissMe123
    November 1

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    awwww......im sorry sweet heart, things will get better don't you worry, you can have anyone, don't forget that, and about the poem its beautiful very descriptive, perfection. (i hope you feel better)