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Reflections of Dew

Are you sure it is a fair maiden you speaketh to in the tower?
Or, a black darker flower?
Either maiden pending upon light or darkness
Relinquishes orgasmic spells cast by her wanton fingers.

Reflection stumbled upon of her fair naked breasts
Must have stirred you in passing upon your stallion
Your journey caressing the surfaces of such relations
All the while maiden seeks penetrating entry of a daring dominating knight.

Her maids undress her preparing her to bath and serve.

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 18

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    Ooh very well done!
    I quite like the sensual, sultry feel to this piece
    Nicely written, poetess
    All the best to you!
    ~Heavenly~


  • Dulcima
    November 10

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    Rapunzel

    I imagine Rapunzel in the tower, watching her fair knight pass beneath until one day she lets down her hair and invites him into her chamber. There, of course, she casts her 'orgasmic spell'. Lovely.


  • awannabepoet
    November 2

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    Wow, wow, what to say, what to say. Marvelous would be a lesser explicative but then I have but tall words from which to fall.

  • Dustandashes
    November 1

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    spellbinding. i can see her siting on a silken divan, hair hiding half her face. very good image. sexy, mideval, human.