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Soul Transplant

Clothed in rags of light
But born to blossom
Into ethereal life
The orignal stock of life
Was grafted to the realm of darkness
Though the spirit of truth was a law
Encoded into their DNA...

Lost in the miasma of confusion
Like orphans clinging to reason
They fail to hear the voice from within
That speaks of love...

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  • rite gold member
    December 5, 2009

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    Awareness has allowed you to survive ordeals that may have killed most or driven them insane. It did not just give you the power to endure but to pass beyond that and become a source of spiritual energy. You words unremittingly reflect the greatness ahead of these dire places and times that we may one day see from a perspective beyond our current perception. You have seen what I intend to express and write from that awareness. It is always a privilege to vit your pages and read the fruit of your mind. Thank you precious soul for sharing. Take care.


  • sgking123 gold member
    November 26, 2009

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    wow

    deep and mature words these yes the voice within us speaks quitea lot often we ignore it when we dolearn to heed it only then we become compltee...nice poem


  • Jon Andoa
    November 13, 2009

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    very good

    I like the conflict in your choice of words, rags/light, blossum/darkness, confusion/reason, fail/love, It really makes a reader think and feel


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 13, 2009

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    Deep spiritual write...Some never "hear that voice within that speaks of love"
    truly they are like orphans lost....Such spiritual insight in this penning!...


  • Luce
    November 3, 2009

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    Love hears the call of love, but too much love turns to hate
    Voices may call, who are they?
    Confusion= ignorance to relate
    Good thoughts judy, I like the way you wrote this

  • Pisces rainbow
    November 1, 2009

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    rooted in the earth

     

    duality

    balance when we merge light into the roots, love into roots

     

    when we are able to apply this to every thought, word and action

     

     

    ONENESS!!!!

     

     

    Lost in the miasma of confusion

    Like orphans clinging to reason

    They fail to hear the vioce from within

    That speaks of love...

     

     

    amazing soulful pleasure Judy

    woven in wisdom

     

    God bless you...

     

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