Languishing before him
her silhouette revolved in rage,
muted songs from ivory keys trickled into memories,
none which she would recall.
With the spring stolen from her step
bleak eyes drank heavily that evening
performing repugnance in the face of betrayal;
searing infidelity into the eyes
once thought to be heaven.
Stunned
he watched her break,
as beautiful in pieces as whole;
her affliction seeping under his flesh
once thought thickened.
Her body soon fell limp to exhaustion
and he placed a blanket
were his arms use to embrace.
Adding your comment:
but terrific write, and great diction, i like the limp description and such, good luck and take care
