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Two Open Paths

With two open paths before me
I feel like Robert Frost
Describing the "road less traveled"
But to what cost?

One swerves off to the right
All tempting and clear
And I can see within my mind's eye
The captivating will to disapear

The second, the hardest to face
Is honest, warning me
This is not to be easy
And there is no guarentee

My feet move forward
In succession with my true will
I reach the end of the path
And go in for the kill

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  • Purush
    November 1

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    all the best in my contest

    "he second, the hardest to face
    Is honest, warning me
    This is not to be easy
    And there is no guarantee

    My feet move forward
    In succession with my true will
    I reach the end of the path
    And go in for the kill"

    Cute short and smart verse

    All the best in my contest