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I Want This Moment To Last Forever

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Sweetheart,I never felt it possible
To have found someone as sweet as you
Baby, you simply leave me breathless
Your smile, lights my up eyes with a sparkle
Most of all, I want this moment to last forever

The emptinesss and loneliness
That once lived within my soul
Has been banished without surprise
Cause you hold my hear,t in you loving hand
And within the I feel feel loved


I am feeling totally blessed
and simply in rapt by your love
Many times I had wished upon the stars
And asked god to send me a man such as you
To my delight, prayers finally answered

Your love encompasses my soul
When ever I close my eyes, all I see is you
Captured in my dreams in such a vivid hue
Whatever I am is because of you
And I thank you for your love!



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  • deedee 23
    November 13
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    so sweet,indeed it's very meaningful and romantic,well write enjoyrd the reading


  • evershine-90
    November 7

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    Awww, this is so beautifully touching. The magic of love indeed brings one's best... Great work and thank you for your entry Best wishes!


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 3
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    what a beautiful stunning piece .. penned from a heart that loves for when the eyes are closed the feelings inside dream of the touch so well told.. in memory of the song sung in the words of love told.. stunning in verse and heart for you have written pure love from your heart Hugs always Angel♥


    • SheWolfNLust silver member
      November 3
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      This was written for my sweetie and I never thought I d ever meet some one I could love again, but Pete was so patient and we both have been through the same and lost someone we love, he is so understanding and just completes me

      • AngelBellerose gold member
        November 3
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        I am so glad hun you found a new love in your life.. for to lose the heart from a dear love and to find another in life is a blessing..the memories are hard still i am sure...but i am happy you have a love in your arms now .. always♥♥

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 1

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    Thank you for your most beautifully worded entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


    • SheWolfNLust silver member
      November 1
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      and thank you for your beautiful comment and wishes for good luck xoxo

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