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The Vampire In The Moonlight

Hiding in the shadows,
you see a dark figure,
It's a young girl,
no more then 13,
her long hair flows in the wind,
her eyes are black and loving,
her skin is flawless and pale,
the moonlight dances around her,
cold chills run up your back,
your muscles tence up,
you want to run away,
but you can't take your eyes off her,
She opens her mouth,
reveling her sharp white fangs,
you step forward,
you are surpised,
you body has moved without you telling it to,
you take another step,
you start to panic,
trying to stop youself,
the girl smiles,
and she steps toward,
you are now face to face,
she wraps her arms around your neck,
and pulls you down to her level,
she opens her mouth big and longingly,
and bites down on your neck,
you are helpless to stop her,
you can't call for help,
and you can't move,
as you feel your life slip away,
you relise,
you just became a vampires meal.

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