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Violent Dead End

look at me
past my eyes
can you see
past all the lies

i advise you stay away
violent rotting and decay

it's time to die
say goodbye
no time to fly
no need to cry

thoughts travel
through the gravel
thoughts unravel
goodbye

bloody death
holy death
lonely death
my last breath

one path
gone away
bloody bath
my last day

arms outstretched
heart torn stretched
my future sketched
past farfetched

mind twisted
not assisted
my death listed
no resistance

in the distance
no more pain
nothing gained
go away

my life story
inventory
my life story
lost and gory

in a cave
misbehaved
life's engraved
nothing's saved

so this is the end
that's it my friend
i just blend
torn and bend



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  • darkness420
    November 1
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    please...dont...


  • Naznomarn
    November 1

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    The Autumn is decay. The Winter is death, yet come the spring, out of all that death and decay, comes beauty and life.
    See beyond the decay
    <3


  • Lanasaur
    November 1
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    Cool, i really like this poem, it makes me feel sad but so happy because i just read an amazing poem!
    Tres Bien
    Lana


  • Coloured Skies
    November 1

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    I liked the rhyme pattern, this was beautifully sad in many ways Rea. I hope you're alright, don't let love get you down (I can talk) but please try not to. You're still young, you have all your life yet to live and believe me when it's time everything will get better for you. <3