look at me
past my eyes
can you see
past all the lies
i advise you stay away
violent rotting and decay
it's time to die
say goodbye
no time to fly
no need to cry
thoughts travel
through the gravel
thoughts unravel
goodbye
bloody death
holy death
lonely death
my last breath
one path
gone away
bloody bath
my last day
arms outstretched
heart torn stretched
my future sketched
past farfetched
mind twisted
not assisted
my death listed
no resistance
in the distance
no more pain
nothing gained
go away
my life story
inventory
my life story
lost and gory
in a cave
misbehaved
life's engraved
nothing's saved
so this is the end
that's it my friend
i just blend
torn and bend
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Comments
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The Autumn is decay. The Winter is death, yet come the spring, out of all that death and decay, comes beauty and life.
See beyond the decay
<3
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Cool, i really like this poem, it makes me feel sad but so happy because i just read an amazing poem!
Tres Bien
Lana


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I liked the rhyme pattern, this was beautifully sad in many ways Rea. I hope you're alright, don't let love get you down (I can talk) but please try not to. You're still young, you have all your life yet to live and believe me when it's time everything will get better for you. <3





