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A dream within a dream

I dream again of Egypt's land,
lotus columns, whispering sand,
and sights now fill my reverie,
imagination set them free.

This, the day of jubilation,
the Sem priest pours sweet libation,
and harp's soft notes upon the air
announces dancers dark, and fair.

Then Pharaoh asks a boon from Thoth
and drapes him in the sacred cloth,
the sistrum's chimes now resonate
as priests their vows asseverate.

On silent stone bright petals rise
Their vivid hues before my eyes
make me think of Hathor's dance,
I feel I'm falling in a trance.

 

White linen whispers to the ground,

then all the music's notes are drowned,

as Re laughs with unbridled mirth

with thumbs hooked in his turquoise girth.

 

was everything just as it seemed

in ancient times, of which I dreamed?

Had pungent incense on the air

stirred musing mind to take me there?

 

Now staring through the window pane,

I long to see those sights again,

but autum's phantoms on the air,

no longer wish to take me there.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Hinemoa silver member
    November 21
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    Dreams are a wonderful way of stretching our imagination just as it has in this fine poem you've entered. Very beautifully written Master Blaster. Good luck in the voting.

    Hine


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    November 16
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    excellent~

    I really enjoyed this read
    Also the imagery in the poem as well
    Keep penning poet
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • pixiestix gold member
    November 13
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    There are no boundaries when it comes to where we travel in our dreams but so often the questions when we find ourselves back in reality.

    I enjoyed the visit to ancient Egypt through the imagery of your well penned piece.

    Best of luck in the contest.


  • Maureen silver member
    November 12

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    Very imaginative poem. It made me wonder where your vision of a land and time so far away came from..the universal subconscious mind, perhaps? Or as the Buddhists believe, a previous lifetime? Very nicely done! Best of Luck in this contest!

    <3 Maureen


  • Pattiboo silver member
    November 7

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    A dream is a wish your heart makes.

    A line from a song in a Disney film but don't know which one, anyway I like it.
    Most people seem to have dreams about exotic places or time periods but I guess you have to know them to dream about them.

    I have a vague feeling I ought to know more about The dream within a dream something to do with Joseph interpreting Pharaoh's dreams?


  • hugh wyles silver member
    November 6

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    Dear Diana,


    Your words the ancient rites evoke
    which, through the acrid altar smoke,
    the white robed priests would chant and pray
    with offerings to Amun-Re.

    I too oft' dream of Egypt's past
    of mighty temples built to last
    perforce at mighty Pharaoh's will
    who, like their ruins, now lies still.

    I dream of that magnificence
    which, like the fumes of burned incense
    once rose to vanish in the sky
    and disappear. I wonder why.

    The greatest Pharaohs' toil and strife
    to join their gods in afterlife
    where Ra, with rising chariot shone -
    the sun still shines - the gods are gone.

    And Pharaoh, for whom thousands toiled
    to make his tomb, now lies despoiled
    of all his wealth, his unwrapped face
    displayed, profaned, glassed in his case.

    His mighty monuments it seems,
    in time, will disappear like dreams,
    the stones lie crumbling on the plain
    as all men's dreams in time are vain.

    Thankyou for entering our 50th contest and for reviving my somewhat fatalistic reminiscences about Pharaonic Egypt with its past glory and splendour.
    Best of luck in the voting.

    Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh.













  • melphleg gold member
    November 2
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    I think you must be an Egyptian, at least at heart.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 2
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    Oh, what an adventure--
    to travel afar, to see
    in exceptional detail,
    to be awed by the sights!

    A truly outstanding creation!!!

    M-C


  • MargaretG
    November 1

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    inspiring

    This is a lovely poem, Di, with your mastery of rhythm and rhyme in full evidence. The wonder of dreams is that we can go anywhere, imagine any time, and create scenes full of detail. This is a fine entry to our contest, thanks!

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