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so close to home




The evening drew to a close, we laughed
at being lost three times;
so close to home.

We had secret passions stashed on the
floorboards, and new movies for the kids.

Laid them down to watch Never-ending
stories, as we created our own;

loving 'til the moon grew weary of
giving shadow to an encore full of heat,
and strawberry flavor I swirled
with the tip of a tongue-fuck and a feeling.

God how you touched me. Fingers sliding
along edge of flesh, palms
enchanting breasts, and travelling length
of side to hip-bones;

my body quaking, shaking, forsaking
all sense

in a slow fuck frenzy that shook us both
to bewildered lands of chaotic mumbles,
and slurred words

pried from clenched teeth.

 

Fully sated I asked if you think that I

am beautiful. Your reply

 

"I don't think, I know"

Once dressed, you fisted a ball of shirt
in your palm

and snored to the sound of my sigh.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


































 

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 7
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    wowza!!!!!! hot hot hot!


  • pixiestix gold member
    November 4

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    I think any couple with young children can relate to what you've written here and the building anticipation of being so close to "home" as it were but not quite there yet. I think it definitely heightens the level when we finally arrive at our destination. lol

    Nicely written steamy scene.




  • Not-The-Sun silver member
    November 1

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    "you fisted a ball of shirt
    in your palm"

    the way you described everything here is so intruiging and realistic; loved it : ) very beautiful