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In* the *End



I went through many things,
I dreamt so many things,
I feared you may never return,
but when you did, it made me worse.

I loved what you were,
but you changed what you were,
I miss
everything about you,
I worked
so hard for you,
I went out,
looking for you,
but in the end...
I lost you...

I smiled when you rang,
you spoke with care,
you spoke with love,
you spoke like nothing was wrong.

I found where you were,
but things changed when I saw,
what the man I loved,
came to be...

I loved what you were,
but you changed what you were,
I miss
everything about you,
I worked
so hard for you,
I went out,
looking for you,
but in the end...
I lost you...

Author notes

s w e e t s i n s
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jpYD6cjx5M0

I tried so hard,
and got so far,
but in the end,
it doesn't even matter,
I had to fall,
to lose it all,
but in the end,
it doesn't even matter...

I put my trust in you,
I pushed as far as I can go,
for all this,
there's only one thing you should know..

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  • adolescente
    November 2

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    so very sad and touching. love how you conveyed the song's lyrics without actually using them.

    well-done, thank you for entering!


  • fatizeh
    November 1

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    Im sorry if this relates to you but it is terribly sad and perfect.I love the repitition in the end.LOL every other piece of yours is so brilliant that it seems like your best among all.And once again im gonna say this is one of your best
    my fav lines:
    I loved what you were,
    but you changed what you were,
    I miss
    everything about you,
    I worked
    so hard for you,
    I went out,
    looking for you,
    but in the end...
    I lost you...


    this poem speaks out hope love and finally a tragedy.It forms perfectly into something brilliant.A story.I just cant find the words to describe its perfection!!


  • hershey101
    November 1

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    aww sorry that you had to go through this and yeah I kno da feeling I've been there and i did the same thg you did I just fall and have to let him go and far as I know but keep your head held high and it will be diffulcult .. but life goes on and on Great poem I love it!!! Deja
    God Bless