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yesterday today and tomorrow

I came here yesterday  and you were  here  sitting in my favourite spot
I came back again today and you havent moved far whats with that
Are you even alive , dont you have a home to go to, i think not
If youre here tomorrow I swear  you will be nothing more than snail blot
My threats never fail but then again ive never taken on a snail
So come on already get a damn wriggle on  I want to lay down  so
Oye just ... bug off .

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  • condor gold member
    November 1

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    LOL!!!!!!!!! So very funny. Seems the poor dog is having a bit of trouble getting to lie in his spot lately. You have given him a great voice and showed that he was just about losing patience with the snails slow moving-non moving attitude. Excellent. Thanks for entering and the best in the contest.


    • glenn shannon silver member
      November 2
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      cheers to you yep what a patient mutt my dog wouldve just cruched it straight away lol have a good one glenn