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Lovely Lady with a Big Heart

Just found out today is your Birthday
So I’d really like to say that I hope
it is wonderful in every way
We have never met, that’s true
but somehow I feel so close to you
Is it the way you care or the way you
want to share?
Can’t put my finger on it at this time
perhaps all those wonderful written lines
you post upon this site?
Lines you work on day and night
to send a message of hope or
warn the kids to give up dope
Even when your back is aching
your time you still are taking
Your care and understanding so plain to see
and you so often agree with me
as we rant and rave about the state
of this old world and how we would
put it right in an hour
if we were only given the power
Ah yes Patty as you have got older
I think you have become that shoulder
that many have needed to lean on
and others have so desperately cried on
No matter what you are always there
so ready to listen and care
And it is so lovely to exchange stories
of our past pain and glories
Both one of eight kids that got up to
all sorts of tricks
So much in common yet worlds apart
but what really unites us is our hearts
So Patty have a wonderful day
cause you deserve it in every way

Author notes

This just a little poem to wish a lovely lady with a big heart a very happy Birthday
God Bless you Patty

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  • MizzConstrued
    November 1

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    friends don't have to touch hands, they can just touch hearts
    Very nice! Wishing her Happy too!


    • Cherrylv
      November 2
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      MizzConstrued

      Hello Mizz
      Thank you for the lovely comment. Yes it is lovely how kindness and friendship makes you glow no matter the distance and 'touching hearts' is a wonderful way to do it
      Patty was thrilled with all the love coming her way yesterday, lol, I think it was pay back time as she is always there for everyone else

      Cherry xxx

  • Bob Fox
    November 1

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    My

    Another wonderful tribute and happy birthing note to Patti. I am sure she is enjoying the beautiful poems bheing penned in her honor. Well deserved. And well penned.


    • Cherrylv
      November 1

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      Bob Fox

      Thanks Bob
      I'm sure Patty is grinning from ear to ear today with such a show of love

      Cherry xxx


  • darlee77 gold member
    November 1

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    Thank you for entering the contest to wish a wonderful lady a happy birthday.


    • Cherrylv
      November 1
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      darlee77

      The pleasure is all mine, I hope she has a wonderful day she deserves it

      Cherry xxx


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 1

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    Oh honey I love you to

    Thankyou for the lovely birthday card and hug from one so special to me indeed . I have tears this morning from so much love sent my way and s want to return a big Texas hug to you for being so sweet .Thankyu honey I love the poem so much

    • Cherrylv
      November 1
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      storiesuntold

      Happy birthday my dear sweet AP big sister
      I'm glad you enjoyed my little rhyme and that I found out in time to wish you all the very best and all the love in the world
      God Bless you

      Cherry xxx

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