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Mend My Mind !!

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Sick form the raising heat that’s inside my vulnerable body,
It’s origins something shifty and beyond my control..

Eyes heavy from the lack of a good night’s slumber,
Constant analysis of my twisted condition has taken its toll..

Tossing violently contained by  my sheets,
Seeking concealment and refuge within my confused mind,

Suddenly realizing that my house is empty of any human presence,
I’m without help and left behind..

Why can’t I rest if I’m this weary?
Why can’t I drift off to sleep?

Can somebody tell me the reason clearly?
Can somebody cling to me as I weep?

Tired,
Lonely,
Angry,
All my girly emotions tangled and mixed up!!

Let me vent,
Let me scream,
I want to be rid of these toxicants that are all pent up..

Everything that I once viewed as essential and fulfilling is now a pathetic disaster!
Stuff my hollow body with something that resembles a soul and mend my broken mind with forever lasting plaster………


Author notes

I need a hug * sniffle *
not having a good day today, fed up with being this sick !!!

can u relate?

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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    November 1

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    look what ur doin to me....u should see me i look like a very sad puppy.
    Dammit i hate that ur still sick! Ive been worried bout u
    I hate seein u like this. I wish i could do something...
    Brilliant poem but it pains me.


    Please get better soon!

  • TroubleInMyMind
    November 1
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    Almost forgot the picture is amazing! Aswell as ur poem rocking it

  • TroubleInMyMind
    November 1
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    Poor gal

    This rips my heart out!
    Feel better


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 1

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    aaww...

    my sweetie! i'm sad for u.. here..x 100.. i hope u feel better soon my sweet friend, just stay positive as you can and keep your head up ok?

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