Whilst storm clouds disipate
rosy
golden
hues
bring a brand new day
whispy
silken
strands
cushion the hidden rocks as
hope
springs
eternal
within the "Essence of Light".
Author notes
Prompt "Essence of Light"
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt: The Essence of Light by mgmc.
700 points, ended November 15, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hope
springs
etrnal
within the "Essence of Light"
quite beautiful
God bless you my friend...
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Thankyou
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I like the way you've formatted your poem. It definitely impacts how its read. Vivid imagery used and a great message delivered poetically. There's quite a bit said in your few words. Very nicely done! Thanks for your entry and best of luck!
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I like how each line draws the eye to the next, lending a sense of connectivity. Nicely written!
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Brilliant penning
..love the colorful imagery as well as the message "hope springs eternal"..love & light is beautiful and pours from your words..nice work with the power od brevity
..wish you the best of luck..many blessings..David 
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i like this format and internal message , well written well done!!
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