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misery....

To see the misery in me
You don't have to look so deeply
It's on the surface, can't you see?
I know... it's kinda creepy

What brought on me this,
I don't know...
Just have to face this
And one day will show...

But to escape it
Yes, I try...
Each every day
I don't deny...

I need some help, some muse...
  Some shock!
To feel that I'm alive
That I'm no rock...

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  • Grey.Area.
    November 1

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    This is awesome. I really like it. Unlike this I hide any misery rather than display it outright.

    Pure.....................Awesomeness

    Loving this part:

    But to escape it
    Yes, I try...
    Each every day
    I don't deny...

    Loving the rhyming and the structure.

    Impressive.