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Lesson from Tolstoy

From womb to casket,
a downward spiral
from truth in life
to illusive misery.

Illusive is the life of man
so taken by instinct:
Building upon a firm will
to power and materials.

The life of happiness
he knew as a boy
is taught away
in ignorance,
and with trust,
      welcomely forgotten.

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Inspired by:
"The Death of Ivan Illyich" (Tolstoy)

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  • Kimmiee65
    November 2
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    Profound. I really think you are in touch with your inner self keep up the good fight. Good stuff!!!


  • internal heights
    November 1

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    wow I want to know what book this is in response to (if it is). it's so short but you really do cover cradle to grave- the more irreversible trends of life.