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In My Head At The Moment


I walk this earth in a maze
one of my own creation;
a child cries as another dies
and I question my reality,

as my dogs lies sick
I scream for him to live,
am I sane in my mind
I being to question his life above others,

maybe it's been too long since
I've been able to make since of one life to another.

All I know right now
is I'm hanging by a thread and he has become my whole,
thus I could not trade him for another
so I'd gladly give myself,

yet would he recover?  

 

 

 

 

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What's going on in your head?
Zek may have cancer...

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  • acalmingvoice
    November 5

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    IS ZEEK ALRIGHT ??? He's tough as nails,.... My thoughts are with you guys


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 3

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    Is this your doggy? I hope not, but if so my thoughts are with you...pets are wonderful and heartbreaking companions. This is a beautiful sorrow filled write... my only problem was the background made it hard to read...otherwise, superb! ~gypsy~


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 1

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    VERY TOUCHING!!!

    One needs a comrade and he is yours, always there to ease your heartache and never complains himself. A closeness like that should be cherished and kept, it does not matter if he is a dog, cat or any other animal, each living thing is precious and shares life with everything around them.