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broken in Your eyes

As words are spoken
None are heard.
As my life drains to no end.
With every heart beat true.
So does every thing i live for.
But some one came
Out of the dark.
To make sure that i live
With these bandages upon my wrist.
I go forth...
Pleading with You.
To take back every thing that was done.
And within Your eyes...
As the reflection of my broken body reflects
Giving me that chance.
My wounds will heal soon.
As the bandages come off one by one.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 14

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    Thank You for Your Entry ~

    I like the tender tone;

    the sense of hope arriving
    after the pain is truly lovely
    to read in this - being healed
    in a way that the bandages
    fall off is sigh worthy for me

    best of luck