pluck-
chapped, plump, purple;
i am ayurvedic medicine
& Nostradamus chaos.
press-
swollen, pulsating, buoyant;
you are kamasutra union
& Casanova memoirs.
ferment-
lingering, tempting, grazing;
champagne caresses
& quicksand absorption.
sip-
melting, fusing, planting;
we are apple guilt bones
& eden ever afters.
refill-
broken strings,
destructive diffusion,
violet winds
& winemaking sins.
A contest entry
- Quickie by n.e.o.n.
400 points, ended November 1, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I am in awe with this piece. I love the use of language and format. It's one of those pieces I want to read again and again. Really, well done.
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I really enjoyed your word usage. It really added a deeper affect for me. I liked the idea of sensuality, it was beautifully done. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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You dragged me into this. I am totally absorbed.
Your grasp of the aesthetics of language is something quite incredible.
Best of luck to you.
--Katie
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whoa.
now that is good!
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