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gun

as i put the gun
up to my head
when i pull the trigger
il be dead

while im falling
to the floor
my heart will
stop forever more

i wont leave
a note
i wont say goodbye
no one will know when i die

no one will cry
no one will mourn
no one will remember
that i was born

all the people
i hold dear
have turned their backs
and do not care

so now i pull
the trigger with
no fear because this
world is just not fair

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  • The Devil18
    November 9
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    this is good i love it


  • WideEyedSuicide
    November 1

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    Suicide, not a very smart thing to do. It is very hard to accept the fact that when you have that gun to your head, you will not do it. There are people that care for you, wether your parents beat you, your friends back stab you, or you just hide out in a cave all day and night. There are people that care for you.

    • peterh360
      November 19
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      no 1 cares for me my life is fucked every1 hates me


      • WideEyedSuicide
        November 19
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        That's not true. I used to think the same way. You have family that cares, even though I have an abusive father, he still cares. My friends care even though I have what...four, five good friends and probably seven friends period. Not everyone hates you, but if you won't change your mind, than have fun with your life, it will be full of hatred and despair, and not from other people, but from yourself. Good luck.