Entice...
My stark, raw honey-drenched world
Take me...
Devour me now.
With breathless wonder,
I await...
Your velvety touch
Upon love's ultimate goal.
Wield the heat of passion's fire.
Weave a tapestry of intense desire.
Stay the winding course
Straight....
To the heart...
To the soul...
To the fiery realm of my spread-eagle inner core.
Delve into...
Its hungering depths...
Licking.
Stroking.
Intense desires erupting
Unfurl appetite's whetted cravings.
Solicit satisfying longings.
Entangle, embrace
Nature's bared urgings.
Heighten awareness.
Enhance arousal.
Caress intimacy's sensations.
I am yours...
Mind.
Body.
Soul.
Take me...
Devour me whole.
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Take me...
Devour me whole.
I am yours...
Mind.
Body.
Soul.
Turn this forbidden passion
Upside down...
Inside out.
Inhabit my very essence.
Allow me luscious pleasure,
Silkily feeling
The touch of a lover's bared soul
Upon love's essential key
Which insanely drives me.
With pulse-beating fervor,
Unlock desire's intimate secret.
Deepen the intrinsic connection,
Nakedly transform
Its true nature.
Focus totally
Upon bringing fulfillment
To the ultimate level.
Beyond physical.
Beyond emotional.
Without limitations.
Life making love with life.
Fusing love, play, magic, ecstasy...
Intimately...
Together as one.
With breathless wonder
I await...
Take me...
Devour me whole.
Author notes
I hope I have done this correctly. I tried... at least.
Thanks for the opportunity to write for such a wonderful contest as this has been. I did have fun! It's fun to stretch the old vocabulary from time to time. I think it's a must... one we all should do from time to time. Thanks again. Have fun judging!
A contest entry
- the embodiment of erotica -->take me now (final round) by JinSays.
4506 points, ended November 16, 13 entries
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Lovely
write u have done sis loved the way it was formed well written and well expressed. U done a great job sis with this and all your poetry. Keep da ink flowing. Its amazing
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read, comment and applaud this. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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I like how your write came full circle. Quite lovely !
"The touch of a lover's bared soul
Upon love's essential key
Which insanely drives me."
these lines trully stood out for me..there is a double entendre to it that I like very much. best of luck to you in this very wonderful final round.
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Thank you, Edie. I appreciate your comment. Best of luck to you as well.
~Donna~
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wow I was thinking about entering and I didnt realize
you were in it and as I read I saw I didnt have a chance nada !!
your write is just amazing totally!! good luck in the contest,
dont think you will need it !
love and blessings
Rend
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This is resonated and enhanced by the palindrome effect. There is an energy and joy that echoes in these lines that makes it enticing.
Love,
tom B.
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Thank you. It was certainly a challenge, but I got it finally. Thanks for stopping by to read, comment and applaud. I appreciate it. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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Brilliant penning, especially on a difficult prompt
You have brought forth stunning imagery..tastefully sensual with the right amount of sizzle..the flipping is smooth as well..very impressive..this piece should do very well
Wish you the best in the contest...David
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David,
Thank you so much for reading, commenting and applauding this. I appreciate Your wonderful comment. Thanks again.
~Donna~
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Oh WOW.. I love the way you captured me with such deep provoking words...
Very intense, yet very tasteful indeed. Well done.
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Thank you. The ultimate compliment paid... When I delve into this world, I try and make each poem unique in its, wording, whatever... I'll admit, the second part of the challenge was just that... a challenge. I think I met it and took it over the top while tastefully writing the whole thing. Thanks again.
~Donna~
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