WithIn the majority of these
standard cases of happiness, one tends to
exclude the negative aspects,
focuses, instead, on those things that make the leaves
sing and dance, rather than,
for instance,
fall,
and wither in piles
alone
and without the drunken kicks of cuffed jeans
passing by.
I say these things because the midwest cries for soul.
For life and for the enduring chalk
once used to write its neglected epic
upon cornfields, and to fly uncaring
upon the broken wings of crows.
I say these things because the midwest cries for soul,
because it weeps and because it
has wept, because we just don't know any better.
I dreamt of a place,
that exists only in the minds of hopeful youths,
that exists, that
a place
with leaves that have never,
will never-
turn rust colored in the inevitable coming of cold-
with paint peeling off of cars with paint
peeling off of cars, with snow piling on top of sagging rooftops
with,
spring fades to winter
fades to
Leaves fall and who can stop
this falling
of snow of ice
of
tired thoughts
composing themselves
to the twitter
of washing machines
of wavering candelight
to the clash of swords
to the unbreakable gaze of portraits
of statues
of rain, of
songs written in the absence of
real heart, written in the columns once
arranged by the sky
re-furnished by greater, whiter
beards, by
insomniacs
by geniuses
by the masses
arranged in formation
along the banks of rivers
in circles
at the powdered roots of looming mountiains
in the knotted roots
of trees, in the
of the,
in the contours of geometric oddities
to the tune of
the outlines of
skyscrapers
of orphanages
of pillars of light of
varying shades of grey,
in the space
in the time, and the holy maw of
rythmn, of time,
to the motions of planets
in the great dark of night
in the great emptyness
of space, of
this is the realm of mist
of dreams
of lamps and crooked teeth.
Of the holy sub-Division of America,
the sanctified ground of shopping malls
and the religiosity of
the quiet of
the movie theatre.
We are the shimmering
silouettes of time and space entities
forming themselves
of will and destiny, of
lost books and daytime television, of
this is the realm of
the home of
the time of, the roar of-
this is the realm of the cosmic yawn,
of the celestial joke, of
this is the realm of, the place for,
the time in which the
this is the
palace of smoke;
of partially obscured mirrors
and secrets.
Author notes
Heh, sorry for the length- got into a little stream of consciousness type of thing.
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Comments
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really good write :)
I first looked at the title and when it said 128 lines, I thought George Michael was on a binge again!
no seriously, I thought it would be a long daunting task to read like a lot of epics. However, you have organised your paragraphs to keep the read interesting. I enjoyed it very much well done
you have earned yourself 3 claps from the Beth-ster


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fucking incredible.


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wow.
so fabulous.
to me, this conjures ginsberg beautifully.
i don't know if that was your plan. but it's so beautiful. your use of the word "of" is amazing and i just love this.
i can't really speak to it highly enough so just know that you have left me speechless and and and--- yes.

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A lot of fantastic images and also an essay in our kind of pointlessness. This carried me. The standing, lying, relaxing and looking. So well written that I will go and read it again Dan. You know I love how you write. You just hammer the nail in the right place but so very gently. Clever man. Yep, very clever man. This is a movie - can you get someone to buy the rights?? Big Love, Ma Townz (Debs x)


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Holy Shit. I fet high after reading this. I don't want you to take that as a compliment or insult. I felt the revolving, the falling downward. I felt something.


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