adrenalin hits hard: like a ko from the amphetamine
anoint me oh wicked one for it's you I'm bound to
you seem to be my cure all: but the downer you have become
at times my mind freezes from hallucinogenic hop
the leader worries to much for the weak: senseless
lay out the plan we will try to follow it
medicate myself to numb the pain has came to easy
the mixture doesn't paralyze like it once did
pain and poison: simple seconds tick on
but, there is a remedy I'm told one of many colors
fuck this tranquilizer: stun it does not
I can still feel this pain
pain and sedate
it will still be there
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- Make me care... by ScarsFade.
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powerful write. to dull the pain is to not learn from it. its simply like holding it all back, then when the sedation wheres off, it all comes crashing down at once, and you burn out instead of learning from it. if you take the time to learn from the pain that is presented to you then you can over come it and use that knowlage to your benifite in confronting future pain. it never gets easier though, because there will always be a greater pain to learn from.
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Amazing, yet hard for me to read. Only because I know a little about what's behind it... so glad you are writing again
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In the 4th line "to" should be "too".
I like this though, and the vague interpretations it encourages.
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wow i like it. your emtions come and shine threw.
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i know it's weird but
why is this labeled abstract?
abstract means simplified -
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well to me abstract means much more than simplified..but that is just me...
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that "more" is essence
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