Hatred misunderstood one too many times.
Longing for love through dark addictions
filled with icy illusions of past smiles.
Eternal disaster sits on the surface, lost.
Tears torn by masked memories of your eyes,
I looked up at to breathe properly: how naive.
Faith falling down all around drowning out dreams.
Spirits drained by silence deep within the nightmare.
Destiny disturbed by broken happiness, washed away
in the moonlight, when the baby slipped past our fingers.
Fatal were the consequences of saying goodbye too soon.
Wandering stars sleep in a hopeless heaven, tormented.
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WORDS I USED FROM WORD BANK: addiction beautiful broken disaster dark disturbed dreams destiny eyes eternal falling faith fatal goodbye hatred happiness heaven hopeless icy illusions love longing lost memories masked misunderstood moonlight naive nightmare past silence stars spirits silence smiles sleep tears torment wandering
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i don't even know what to say about this it seems a bit too real, hopefully this is just a poem from you, but if not, wow, keep it flowing
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thak you love i am good tired alot but good trying to remember to walk everyday how are you and everything? call you soon
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unfortunately there is realness in this poem, eventually time and writing have a way of healing one's soul along with prayer but some days i still feel the nag of it all so i write ya know thanks for reading
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as always brilliantly written and expressed. keep it up and hope to hear from you soon. how is everything coming along?
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thank you love sometimes the emotions of past hurts still have to come out ya know but i am doing good just waiting for january and trying to rememeber to walk everyday how are you talk to soon
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