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it takes minutes to make moments

 

I.

she taught me
that standing in rain

was just like being in love;

uncertainty
as it first touches flesh,
but how it warms as it lingers

how it builds to a tempest-

she teems torrents
that squall saturation,

just by her presence.


II.

I love her scent
when freshly showered;

pure innocence

as water trails skin
fondling seduction,
whispering its wet caress-

long hair streamlines
feminine features
and light catches
to reflect prismatic eyes;

I cradle her in cotton inhibitions,
inhale the sensual stream of her breathing

and I too am cleansed.


III.

 

I feel her majesty

like that of a sculptor

 

envisioning a future piece;

 

careful to mould shape

with delicate precision,

 

to deliberate

upon each curve carved


to penetrate realms of the living-

 

it is with passion,

that each chiseled stroke

uncovers beauty

 

for she gifts me her completion.

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Artist: logtr

Link: http://logtr.deviantart.com/art/Surrender-102804443

Write three sensual vignettes using the picture prompt.
Number each vignette.
(I., II., and III.)

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  • Mango Memories gold member
    November 26
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    this runs perfectly.


  • michael thomas gold member
    November 11
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    great work in words.


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 3

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    This is a tender and impeccable response to the prompt, Poet. Good luck in Ann's contest.




  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1

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    my jaw is on the floor because this is just ... wow;

    my gosh Rob, you've stunned me with pure beauty, sensuality, desire and love -
    what a beautiful poem, if I had your vocabulary I am sure I could compliment this better but you know me and my limited resources from within;

    the image of water cleansing and cascading to enrich the body is delightfully delicious in the softest of ways


  • annother gold member
    November 1
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    I love the ties to water in this piece, very sensual. Thanks for the entry and best of luck.


  • stef-witt gold member
    November 1

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    This is so stunning!!

    Delicate and loving and honest.

    I can't say anything... My words don't feel good enough to comment on this.


  • PastelMoons gold member
    November 1

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    Beautiful , sensual , magical,
    just to name a few emotional responses...
    Breath-taking as always .
    Thank you for sharing,
    and best wishes in the contest!

    Pastel


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 1

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    1. seductive.
    2. sensual
    3. regal.
    ah, to be the words you form on a blank page.... amazing..  

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