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What should I say?

What should I say
what should I do
when all they want to do
is say boo, boo, boo

You see, I have a problem
with all those ghost
and goblins wanting
to scare the heck outta me

But I have a trick
for them, if they want it
because I am going to
give them the scare of their life

I am going to dress
up in the most
disgusting thing I can
do with all my makeup and bag of tricks

My time of fun
is just around
the corner
and I will give them my trick

ha ha ha ha

I will be doing this
long into the night
with a blowing of
the chilling autumn wind

Eerie is not the word
for the sounds
that will be coming
from me


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  • Bob Fox
    November 5
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    Lol

    Good for you poet. Perhaps the ringing of the door beel may cease. But tis always good to read some cute and witty poetry.


  • Rick Weston silver member
    November 2

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    cute and fun. i recall a neighbors we had when the kids were younger who made calling on their home halloween nights a display of courage to face the fright. i liked your first three stanzas the most.


  • Storminbrenda silver member
    November 1
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    LOL! love it hun funny and charming well done xx


    • lovlilmystery
      November 1

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      Thanks Stormin. Just a little something, I thought of at the last minute. And wanted to share with everyone. Thanks again. Take care and have a great day.

      Sandi