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Asylum

It’s a crazy world inside of my mind
There are so many souls I wish I had the heart to despise
It’s a nightmare inside of the only cage that’s justified
There’s one lie inside of my mind I always wish to have
And no I’m living the one life I wish I never had

There’s something missing, there’s nothing there
Only if things made sense, then I could turn them away
Only if I had the eyes to see what isn’t there
Live without my mind to avoid another Holocaust
Die without a heart and soul, NOW I’M NOT ABLE TO CARE!

When the sky falls to the ground,
We’ll all be killed without a sound

Wake up. 

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The seventh piece in "The Lonely Decease"

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  • Dearly Beloved...
    November 3

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    I Love this peice!
    Its a nice length and i couldnt agree more with you message
    The emotions ddint need to scream, they were that strong on thier own
    Your work is really coming along nicely
    great write


  • Fibe Kill-DFW Punk-
    November 2

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    Awesome. Brooding, deep, and even a little brutal. I really liked the last two lines before the last one. "When the sky falls to the ground, We’ll all be killed without a sound" Awesome work, awesome writting.



    Cheers,
    Rat