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Another hit of you

Getting the shakes
need another dose
of the only drug that
gets me high anymore...

The dose of happiness
that eats at my blood
screws up my brain
and brings me to sheer
ecstasy.

My walls are caving in
without the injection
of the sweet pain
killer.

I can handle this,
just one more hit
I can stop
I promise.

It's all falling apart
I can't get out
I need it
ohh please give me it..

You save me, but you kill me
I can't make it...
it's over..

I'm addicted..

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