In the flickering light of a candle
A moth shakes powdery wings
Words vibrates and flutters
Bring new meaning to life
Free floating strands, woven
In a fine silken cocoon
Poetic touch, a melody
Soon emerges in emotion
Bound by rhythm and rhyme
Kind, kindred songs to the
Long gones of yesteryears’
Chorus for those that came before us
The silence that falls from the
Outline of the script resonates
The ebb and flow, shores
Shrieking like a piece of sandpaper
Begging for consideration
I shudder and cling like a lost
Soul to every word that
Lies before me, selective
Within the frame time passes
Through the empty spaces of lines and
I wonder if the knowledge should
Be taken for granted or saved as a treasure
With each strand I weave my tapestry
But meddling thoughts keep cutting my silk
Knotting it in a changing pattern
Until my thread is a tripwire
Ink spilled by the skill of an artist’s quill
Dark against light
A Rorschach pattern that only the
Ill minded can interpret
Author notes
Contest: Write about an observation
A contest entry
- Observation by sideways hourglass.
600 points, ended November 11, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I agree with Tegan's commentary.
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The rules said left align only.
Your observations here were great, but the images jumped around a lot. Also, I feel that the ending could have done with a little more punch.




