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Untitled Number Eleventy tres.

Feel the sorrow
feel the pain
forget this life
it's all a game.
I've over this
I'm over you
the lies you told
were never true.
Holding on
and holding back
you just pointing
at what I lack.
This isn't fair
this isn't me
I can't be who
you want me to be
Forget the tears
forget the strain
I'm over this trouble
I'm over the rain.
Raindrops fall
on windowpane
along with tears
on paper, stained.
Dropping the issue
forgetting the past
moving on
over broken glass.
Open up
for someone new
feel a love
that's new and true.
This is it
a brand new chance
just look at tomorrow
no backward glance.

Author notes

Yeah so this isn't about anyone or anything going on in my life. I just started writing after the first four lines popped in my head randomly... yay for random inspired-ness.

I'm trying to get back in a writing mode...

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  • LuthienIdril
    October 31

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    OH MY GOSH! I LOVE this piece! It flows beautifully and it is just awesome! The thoughts are so clear and I can relate to it. You may have outdone yourself on this one Jazz. Its amazing!

    • Jazzyjune
      October 31
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      Thank you!!

      I'm glad you loved it Cause I do too. Hehe. I love when I don't think about it too much and just write whatever comes to me first. They turn out so much better then