For every door shut
another is opened,
spinning new destines
that should remain unspoken.
You left me forsaken,
broken and bleeding.
Every, "I love you"
was deadly misleading.
The future I envisioned
was now erased,
leaving dark dreams
in its place.
But as I lived on
my heart began to heal.
Once again I have
learned to feel.
A brand new life
was not unveiled,
but I have managed
to still prevail.
I have not found the key
to some mystic new door,
but I'm more hopeful
than I was before.
A new window appears
letting in light,
even if it's only the stars
in the dead of night.
A contest entry
- A to Z by Desdmona.
1000 points, ended November 1, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Wow, for once someone got the rhyme to work so good job on that. I've seen so many poems were the rhyming is forced and overall distracts from the poem but this is well done. I like the interpretation and it is a great write. Good job and good luck! ~Des
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honey I hope this is not for real and you and James are still on for the kill.. i would be said if the door closed for you know hold in your hand the heart he holds well penned love always hugs Angel♥
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