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Storiesuntold It's Your Birthday

Another year is coming just
around the corner. You're living
a full life. You're a great person.
A great poet as we all know.

I wish you the happiest
birthday. It may just be
another year. But to every
one it's another year that God
gave you to live.

It's your birthday time
to get up and celebrate.
Smile for it's your day today.
Don't let anyone bring you down
not on your day.

Storiesuntold it's
your birthday. Happy
birthday.

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Hope you have an amazing Birthday Storiesuntold

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  • darlee77 gold member
    November 1

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    Thanks for helping us wish a lovely lady a happy birthday with a wonderful poem.


  • Denerica
    November 1

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    A well wisher... nice sentiment...simplictic in it's beautiful heartfelt words. Well done Blessings.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 31

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    Oh honey

    Thankyou so much for this lovely birthday poem . I am so excited about this contest for no one has ever given me a birthday contest in the two years I have been on here .This is such a lovely poem and a huge hug to my heart Thankyou so much honey