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E.R.M.

Love
Small, Soft
Cooing, crying, smiling
Love of my life
Daughter

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Cinquain I wrote for my daughter

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  • Shakes-spear
    November 1

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    very nice

    I just wrote one for my new grandson. Having a new one to love is the greatest gift from God. You are blessed and we are blessed by you! Love and kissed to you and yours, The Shaker