TENDER TOUCH
The scene is set:
perfumed candles glow
in shades of gold and flame;
mellow to merge with melodies
of tranquil music playing soft and low
My fingers know their tender task:
To soothe tired muscles with gentleness
And loosen ligaments tight and trained
They must be light at times, and gently firm
Bold to seek those hidden places where pleasure hides.
They must tempt each smallest tingle and tease each tremor
Wherever they may be - in soft curves or secret folds
And lips and teasing tongue must follow the selfsame paths
Like some exotic butterfly on precious blooms
Tongue describing spirals, licks and flicks
This butterfly will feast on moist and musky scents
Slowly, gently sip your woman’s dew
These lips will play ‘this little piggy’
With fingers and toes
To make you smile
And all the while you will know the man in me
Roused as homage to your beauty
I will want no more this night
But to hold you close
Drowse to dreams
Of butterfly kisses
And a tender touch
A contest entry
- Give Me Hot Lovin' by StarlightCerulean.
1000 points, ended November 10, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Exquisite
very nice. its so sensual and romantic. its so well written and creative.
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I'm just pleased you enjoyed it ... after all, what good is a massage if you don't feel better afterwards ...
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Michael, this is lovely. Just that. Lovely. X Debs
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Thank you
Mike
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meic
I like the visual aspect of this poem. clever. good luck in the contest.
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Thank you very much
Mike
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such a sweet write, the picture of love is a beauty worth sharing, and this ticks all the boxes for good love and good poetry x
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Thank you very much ... I'm pleased you enjoyed the read.
Mike
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White rose wolf
Wow great write, i like the choice of words you used to write this it's gentle, sweet, and sexy nice job
sincerly,
angel
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Thank you for the lovely compliment!
Mike
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love it
i really love this poem it is very well written excellent job a extra kiss for that.
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Thank you for your comment ... and the extra kiss was extra welcome!
Mike
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I'm glad to see someone who obviously knows the difference between love and...not love. Good luck in the contest, Scribe. 'Tis...a lovely penning. 
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I don't think I've had any kind of intimate relationship without at least liking and respect [well, certainly since my late teens!]. Good sex should enhance an already good relationship and add to it - in other words it is MAKING love. xo
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I evan began referring to it as "creating love", as it should be created anew, I believe.
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...even the form of the poem is a flaming torch!
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Hey ... well spotted!!! an extra hug for that!
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