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I see only heaven in her eyes

I:

Waves caress the hem of her dress,
in her mind she soars with the seagulls.
Arms outstretched the wind gives her wings,
to fly free circling high above.

II:

With rapt attention I dream of a touch,
a kiss from full lips on my own.
On the path in my mind, together we walk,
hand in hand, side by side, so wrapped in love.
From above she was sent to brighten my days,
while walks in the past, prepared me for this.
The other half of my soul is shown.

III:

Her basic beauty is stunning without adornment,
waking next to her is a conscious dream.
Nights now are filled with passionate promise,
for the rest of our days to come.
Featherlight caresses with fingertips,
trace a pathway from chin to breast.
Without rest they undress a temple of lust,
where I want to worship till I die.
The nectar of the God's supped between hips,
I wish only for her satisfied sighs.
It comes as no surprise when apex is reached,
that it is then ,her turn to teach.




Author notes

This picture is your prompt.
Credit the artist and provide a link in your Author Notes.
Artist: logtr
Link: http://logtr.deviantart.com/art/Surrender-102804443

Write three sensual vignettes using the picture prompt.
Number each vignette.
(I., II., and III.)
It's gold or nothing, write for it.





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  • amnouup
    November 16
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    Wow...

    I have no words to admire the beauty of this write, it brings life to the words
    regards,
    Mou


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 13
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    A lovely piece you have penned
    this is breathtaking

    love you too

    Tory

  • Winwood
    November 11

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    Beautiful write...sensual and tender. The woman in your life is blessed to be loved on this level. You have found the beauty of a soulmate...and nothing is more divine


  • annother gold member
    November 1
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    Lovely sensual and romantic write. Very dreamy. Thank you for the entry and best of luck.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 1
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    Beautifully penned, it like sea and lovemaking grows in tempo. Bravo!


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    October 31

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    Wow and very sensual, beautifully written, I can so see how much you love that lady of yours here, bravo and much luck to you in the contest

    I really so loved the part below


    Waves caress the hem of her dress,
    in her mind she soars with the seagulls.
    Arms outstretched the wind gives her wings,
    to fly free circling high above.

    ..... I love sensual poetry but I so suck at writting it, It would help if pete wrote poety too cause then we could write together sensual poems, but any how it dont matter, I am truely blessed to have such an wonderful man who each day suprises me more and more!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 31

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    wow Scott; your quill just breaths sensuality, love & romance
    utterly divine


  • Mango Memories
    October 31
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    ooo

    after reading this - i dont want to enter the comp.

    this is pure.

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