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Writing is My Obsession

The words flow from my fountain pen...
Twisting in cursive on my cotton paper...
Swiftly, easily, flowing smoothly.
This beautiful art is what I do best...
Should I stop, I'd be completely insane.

A life such as mine reflects into my writing
Such as a light would flow through tranluscent figures.
Happiest most with a pen in my hand...
Sadness kills my will when I am forced to put it down.

You can call it Obsession, if you must.
I'd agree with a heart-filled "Definitely!"
Writing is my only obsession, I have to say.
I love it more than almost anything...
It helps my pain flow from my mind...
It helps me leave that razor alone.

Writing is My Obsession.

~~

Flowing a pen across a paper with care.
Lovingly flitting from end to end.
Left to right. Side to side.
This is when I realize:
I care so much, so fully about writing...
I will be holding a pen even when I die.  ~~

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  • Lol, see the free verse!!! I tried hard! lol It's hard for me not to rhyme. I'm glad you enjoyed it, my dearest friend.


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    October 31

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    Simply Brilliant

    Bravo, and a awesome job, I very much love this poem, and found it had a beautiful flow, I so loved the way you painted these words

    The words flow from my fountain pen...
    Twisting in cursive on my cotton paper...
    Swiftly, easily, flowing smoothly.
    This beautiful art is what I do best...
    Should I stop, I'd be completely insane.

    A life such as mine reflects into my writing
    Such as a light would flow through tranluscent figures.
    Happiest most with a pen in my hand...
    Sadness kills my will when I am forced to put it down.

    Cause I can totally relate, I dont like when I am forced toput my pen down either lol

    • Buah. I forgot to put "Reply" lol! I tried hard of the free verse, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!