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Abandoned

My journey started at the store
A book store to be precise
Two younger girls of fifteen

They came and asked a drink

I was lucky to be of their choice

 

They loved me and allowed me

To do no more than fulfill my duty

To please their taste buds

And warm their bodies

Bliss is my ownly emotion as of now

 

But this content is to an end

My ending should have been

None other than a recycling bin

Even a trashcan would be better

But this is not my fate

 

Thrown! Not in a bin

Not in the natural land

Not in the sorrowful sea

No! In the van of stench

 

Forgotten for so long

Ignored and kicked around

Left to rot in this horrible waste

Abandoned

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Another strange one. I saw this picture (http://acousticgirl2894.deviantart.com/art/Abandonned-123492160) and I thought I'd write a poem in the view of the poor starbucks hot chocolate.

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  • chelseacec
    November 7
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    lol i like it. very random. ^^