Mother Mary can you hear me?
I cant make it through the night.
It seems this life left forsaken,
doesn't seem worth the fight.
When you left me in this breakdown,
I didn't know what to feel.
Now that everything seems wrong,
I know the lies aren't for real.
Mother Angel can you see me,
why have you left me in the dark.
I reach out for your comfort,
but can never find it in your heart.
The future seems so cold, like the ice in hell.
The truth was left behind you, left in heaven when you fell.
So much for your the wings, to ease your way down.
And what about the halo, your death before the ground.
Mother can you hear me.
I cant make it through the night.
The life you've given me,
doesnt seem it was right.
When you kept me in this lock-down,
and tried to feed me what to feel.
Now that everything seems wrong,
I know the truth was never real.
Mother can you see me,
or have you closed your eyes.
Left me in this pit,
of all your filthy lies.
And when the future's so cold, like the ice in hell.
My faith in you is dead, like the life I've never felt.
So much for your comfort, to ease me when I'm down.
Remove this fucking halo, and leave me where I'm bound.
A contest entry
- Dark Poetry Contest by Sweetest-Maleficia.
950 points, ended November 19, 2009, 28 entries
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Comments
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wow, you left me speechless with this poem. you wrote it perfectly, and it is so deep. AMAZING.
thank you!


