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The Hiding of Thy Identity

The hiding of thy identity

Lesson 1: be sure thy presence
is unknown
If thou be known
Thou shalt be caught

Lesson 2: where not the mask
of which thou hath made
Thy enemy is sure
to know thine ability

Lesson 3: where not the same
mask of which thou wore
the day before
Thy enemy
is sure to recognize

Lesson 4: be of proper age
If thou shalt be of youth
Thou is sure to fall
into false pleasure

Lesson 5: thou should be mature
This is not a game
If thou wisheth to play
Leave immediately

Lesson 6: turn now away
This message shalt destroy
And thou hath fail

Thou hath been in mine presence
before this present day
Thou hath made thine own mask
identity decifered
Thy mask is identified
Worn the day of creation
Thou be far too young
maturity test, failed
This is not a game

Author notes

Sorry, guys. Kinda bored so looked through some pictures. This poem was inspired by this picture (http://acousticgirl2894.deviantart.com/art/HidingHisIdentity-123493449). That's my brother but not my devart account. He was 6 (i think) when the picture was taken. His' kinda a wierdo so I figured a strange poem would fit. Enjoy ^^

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