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My Head Filled with Waves

placid with heat emanating from my eyes
steady without wavering under any skies
head throbbing with anticipation
surfing is my only elation

glassy and peeling
hiding then revealing
pitching and curling
airborne then swirling

from sunken faces
to rolling shoulders
section after section
tricking at my own discretion
I'll surf anything and everything

Author notes

just saw the surf report calling for clean glassy 3-4ft in the morning ...SUPER STOKED ON SOME BARRELS

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  • giggles22
    November 6
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    very nice, liked the rhyme scheme