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Mask of Loves Deception



How easily the word Love is thrown around
Like an old toy that gets replaced with a new one
A good but not necessarily better version then the last

If you could put a price on love it would go to the highest bidder
And once the buyer gets sick of there newest purchase
They will just decide to buy a new one with a higher price tag

You cant just turn it off and on like its a light switch
Leaving them in darkness while you make up your mind
Its either glows there for eternity or yet not at all

Don't throw it around if it's not how you feel
Or screw around with it and pretend that's its real

How easily the word love can be a mask of deception


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  • LifeEndsNow
    November 6

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    Hey I haven't commented on your stuff in forever and first new one I see of course I "love" lol that that was funny, but no it's great. I think people throw the word love around like they do is because we really don't fully understand what it is to really love someone, sure we get the emotion down but we have issues on the abilty to forgive through love. its like saying I love you but you need to change this this and this, love is being able to over look every flaw..

    great job though lol

    -Kevin


  • Angel-of-Pain
    November 2

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    dont worry this poem is very much to my liking


  • lost
    November 1

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    wow, great piece. I completely agree with it, such an accurate write on love these days. nice


  • Afe-la
    October 31

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    I agree with this. To many times is this word wasted. It is something that should never wain, not go in and out of fashion. People should be gentle and careful when they use it, and not waste. Everyone knows the story of the boy who cried wolf.

  • you know I can agree with this a lot of people take love for granted. another great write!

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